The Sound of the Hollyhocks

A poetic response to "The Sound of the Hollyhocks"

Pinehills Clinic, cold and silent 

Without talking to others

Alone alone alone

With one man talking about life

How would it be like

Bad marriage, bad family and bad life

How could I getaway from this

Maybe die is the way to do

Outside, hollyhocks bloom 

Beautiful, peace and bright

Bang
The submarine crashed in the sea
No more air
Later the captain aware
It's time to decided
To be survive or be die
Have some drinks
We'll meet at the other side
I'm proud of you guys
Keep that inside of your mind
Take care of your family and it's time
for us to say goodbye
Save five
Kill twenty-five
That 's the choice of life